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Love at First Sight by ~StarFire20:iconStarFire20:

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One quick moment
a twist of fate
Unaware how quickly
Our lives would change

A curious phone call
an innocent request
a hidden chance
to put our strength to the test
Strangley attracted to
someone I barley even know
Just remember
not to let your feelings show

One quick moment
a twist of fate
Unaware how quickly
Our lives would change

A two day omtition
an inevitable descision
How could this happen so quick
Why didn't I fight it
Why didn't you resist
Why ask all these questions
We'll see what matters
We have eachother now
One quick moment, a twist of fate
if only I knew how you'd make
my life change

One quick moment
a twist of fate
Unaware ofw quickly
your mind would change

An ominous phonecall
A heartbreaking request
Never knew my strength could fail any test
Suddenly abandond
Left with reasons I'll never know
Just hold in your tears
Don't let your broken heart show....
Just let him go

One quick moment a twist of fate
Unaware how quickly
life brings us together
And tears us away

Someday you'll come back
all we need
Is another twist of fate
©2007-2010 ~StarFire20
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Author's Comments

This one I wrote last year not my best but i'm gonna post everything i have so yea...dont be to crule lol...just playin'

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~RKlvr Feb 4, 2007, 7:52:28 PM
Lovely.

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.::When all the other little girls wanted to be ballerinas, I wanted to be a vampyre [link] ::.
-I'm not shy. I'm just anti-social-
--Dead to the world... so now the real life begins... [link]
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~Nix0xiN Feb 5, 2007, 12:31:53 AM
the repetition works really well :)

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Fix up, look sharp.
Hereeeeeeeeeeee's Johnny!
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~StarFire20 Feb 5, 2007, 4:53:24 AM
yay...thanx

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-"I'll tell you," she said in the same huried passionate wisper, "What real love is. It is blind devotion, unquestioning self-humiliation, utter submission, trust and belife aginst yourself and aginst the whole world, giveing up your hole heart and soul a
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~StarFire20 Feb 5, 2007, 4:56:48 AM
:joy: i am glad ya like it it's one of my favorites that I've written

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-"I'll tell you," she said in the same huried passionate wisper, "What real love is. It is blind devotion, unquestioning self-humiliation, utter submission, trust and belife aginst yourself and aginst the whole world, giveing up your hole heart and soul a
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~soul-in-shadow Feb 11, 2007, 6:00:54 PM
i like the repatition! (spelling?) ya this is really good!

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make me believe in always
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~StarFire20 Feb 11, 2007, 7:13:22 PM
you are makin me blush so bad today thanx for the flattery!

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-"I'll tell you," she said in the same huried passionate wisper, "What real love is. It is blind devotion, unquestioning self-humiliation, utter submission, trust and belife aginst yourself and aginst the whole world, giveing up your hole heart and soul a
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~soul-in-shadow Feb 12, 2007, 5:58:32 PM
haha! awe shucks!

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make me believe in always
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